Email Opening Samples

1. Professional and Insightful – Targeting BOCES Leadership/Staff Hi [Name], I’ve just re-read your article on [BOCES’ website/LinkedIn post] about [new adult education programs], and I had to reach out. I really appreciated the way you highlighted [subject]. It struck such a chord with me, especially as someone who has taken BOCES adult education classes…

Speculative Application Email Sample

Hi, [Name] Struggling to find a job in today’s competitive market? You’re not alone. That’s why Eastern Suffolk BOCES is offering career-focused training programs designed to give you the skills and connections you need to succeed. At Eastern Suffolk BOCES, we understand the challenges of navigating today’s job market. Our hands-on training programs are designed…

Case Study Sample

Suffolk BOCES Portfolio Case Study Sample Eastern Suffolk BOCES Eastern Suffolk BOCES In the 2018-19 school year. 96% of BOCES Career and Technical Education (CTE) seniors graduated.  Of the graduates, 52% pursued higher education, and 35% entered the workforce directly.   Challenge  Limited Hands-On Experience Before BOCES. “Before starting at BOCES, students felt like they were stuck learning…

Cold Email Sample

Hey Mr Jones, Feeling the squeeze at the gas pump or the grocery store? You’re not alone — and Eastern Suffolk BOCES is here to help. At Eastern Suffolk BOCES, we understand that times are tough — but the right skills can open new doors. Our career training programs are designed to help you gain…

Press Release Sample

Press Release With this, I hope to demonstrate how I’d communicate news to the media and public. FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASEMarch 11, 2025 HEADLINE: New Adult Education Programs at BOCES – Fast-Track to Employment! Dateline & Lead Paragraph/ the Hook: The who, what, where, why, and how & body HOLBROOK, NY — March 11, 2025 — Eastern…